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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Marie Antoinette

    Hello, dear. Since this is the first review I have done of your writing, let me know if you need anything explained or that my handwriting is illegible. 1. I ...

    Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:36 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Papillion (1)

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you need help deciphering my handwriting or have any questions, feel free to PM or poke me. Hope this helps. Ta, Cal.

    Mon May 24, 2010 11:35 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Romanov

    Hey, honey. I swear your poems are like candy; I gobble them up. I totally did this critique a while back, but when I tried to post it my scanner ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 11:26 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: picture of an old cowboy dying in the city

    Hey, honey. This again, like Romanov was a poem that I critiqued quite a bit of time ago. But my scanner was being evil McEvil face about stuff, so I ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 11:24 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Under a Bright Blue Sky

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. Feel free to PM or poke me if you have any questions or cannot read my handwriting. 1. Stanzas I believe you poem would ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 11:21 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rentre ?? la Maison: Come Home

    Hey, honey. So sorry it took me this long to post a critique. Life happened. Rather forcefully I might add. So here we go. If you have any questions about ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 11:12 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you don't understand my handwriting/scrawl or anything else needs to be clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. 1. The ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 10:40 pm
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: "Sepia" Rewrite

    Hey, hon. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or need anything clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. Tada. I really like this ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 10:33 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cursed

    Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or want clarification on anything, don't hesitate to poke or PM me. 1. Do the Punct! I believe ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 10:25 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: "Insomnia", a small character analysis

    Hello, dear. So here is my spiel. If you can't read my handwriting or if you want something clarified, please feel free to PM or poke me. :D Now onto ...

    Mon May 24, 2010 10:20 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Alice: Chapter One

    Hi, LavenderBlue. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. Here we go. Other Things I. Alice Alice seems ...

    Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:05 am
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Of Jinn and Devil

    Hello, Dreamworx. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. So, here we go. So apparently, my scanner did ...

    Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:45 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"

    Hi, NaRachel. First off, if you have any questions or need any help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. :D Off we go then. So apparently, my ...

    Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shrive: Chapter 1

    Hi, honey. So, again, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. I. Letter Writing I like the letter at the ...

    Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:15 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shrive: Prologue

    Hiya, darling. You know the drill. If you have any questions or my handwriting is illegible, please tell me. I like how the prologue is in present tense. It gives ...

    Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:05 pm


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