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Re: Marie Antoinette
Hello, dear. Since this is the first review I have done of your writing, let me know if you need anything explained or that my handwriting is illegible. 1. I ...
Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:36 am -
Re: Papillion (1)
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you need help deciphering my handwriting or have any questions, feel free to PM or poke me. Hope this helps. Ta, Cal.
Mon May 24, 2010 11:35 pm -
Re: Romanov
Hey, honey. I swear your poems are like candy; I gobble them up. I totally did this critique a while back, but when I tried to post it my scanner ...
Mon May 24, 2010 11:26 pm -
Re: picture of an old cowboy dying in the city
Hey, honey. This again, like Romanov was a poem that I critiqued quite a bit of time ago. But my scanner was being evil McEvil face about stuff, so I ...
Mon May 24, 2010 11:24 pm -
Re: Under a Bright Blue Sky
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. Feel free to PM or poke me if you have any questions or cannot read my handwriting. 1. Stanzas I believe you poem would ...
Mon May 24, 2010 11:21 pm -
Re: Rentre ?? la Maison: Come Home
Hey, honey. So sorry it took me this long to post a critique. Life happened. Rather forcefully I might add. So here we go. If you have any questions about ...
Mon May 24, 2010 11:12 pm -
Re: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you don't understand my handwriting/scrawl or anything else needs to be clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. 1. The ...
Mon May 24, 2010 10:40 pm -
Re: "Sepia" Rewrite
Hey, hon. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or need anything clarified, please do not hesitate to PM or poke me. Tada. I really like this ...
Mon May 24, 2010 10:33 pm -
Re: Cursed
Hey, honey. So here's my spiel. If you cannot read my handwriting or want clarification on anything, don't hesitate to poke or PM me. 1. Do the Punct! I believe ...
Mon May 24, 2010 10:25 pm -
Re: "Insomnia", a small character analysis
Hello, dear. So here is my spiel. If you can't read my handwriting or if you want something clarified, please feel free to PM or poke me. :D Now onto ...
Mon May 24, 2010 10:20 pm -
Re: Alice: Chapter One
Hi, LavenderBlue. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. Here we go. Other Things I. Alice Alice seems ...
Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:05 am -
Re: Of Jinn and Devil
Hello, Dreamworx. First off, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. So, here we go. So apparently, my scanner did ...
Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:45 pm -
Re: Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"
Hi, NaRachel. First off, if you have any questions or need any help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. :D Off we go then. So apparently, my ...
Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:39 pm -
Re: Shrive: Chapter 1
Hi, honey. So, again, if you have any questions or need help deciphering my handwriting, please give me a shout out. I. Letter Writing I like the letter at the ...
Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:15 pm -
Re: Shrive: Prologue
Hiya, darling. You know the drill. If you have any questions or my handwriting is illegible, please tell me. I like how the prologue is in present tense. It gives ...
Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:05 pm
